For writing this week we have been doing descriptive writing. Mrs Clark gave us this picture and we had to write ideas about this picture using Verbs, Nouns, Adverbs and Adjectives.
WALT: Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers
Adjectives
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Nouns
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Verbs
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adverbs
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cloud
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War x 2
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bad
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Beach
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guns
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rainy
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tankes
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bombs
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One rainy cloudy day there was a war in
christchurch and it was a bad war they
had guns,knives,bombs,tankes.
everyone had a boat and it was germans
and Australians
christchurch and it was a bad war they
had guns,knives,bombs,tankes.
everyone had a boat and it was germans
and Australians
Hi Kieran, I liked your graph and how you have highlighted the words you have used to explain your story. My suggestion is to make sure you use capitals and full stops-it will become easy with practice. :-) Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHi Kieran,
ReplyDeleteI like your description of the photo. I like how you used comma's when listing what army stuff was there.
I wonder how this fight went? Who won? I hope it wasn't the Germans.
From Vann